And..... I got eaten alive. The class hated my essay and I don't think that they were to pleased with my presentation. So yeah. Looks like I need to rewrite my paper. I do agree with the class however, the paper needs a lot of work, transitions, organization... I honestly am not happy with the way it is now, I knew that going into the presentation. I just think somewhere along the line I lost the desire to write it. "What is your salient point?" "Um.... I honestly don't know. I isn't real clear to me either." WOW. I'm amazing.
I was not happy with the presentation myself, I went through it way to fast and had a hard time making eye contact with the class. Plus there wasn't enough time for the activity I had planned, which is probably good because the feedback I got was something along the lines of "this can't be pieced together. You can't take four different stories and put them together to make one." etc etc etc.
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